Decided to fix my position relative to the model and do a pastel pencil drawing this week. Right thigh reads too long for the right calf to me – foreshortening calf error, maybe? Not sure. Something doesn’t look right.
While I like the composition as it is on the toned paper, other artists suggested I needed to add atmosphere of the room – walls and drapery.
Progress not perfection.
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